Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am living in the apartment with my family.
It is a very old apartment.
So it doesn\'t have a dress room.
My bedroom is very small because of the closet.
I need only my room for me I don\'t want to share with my husband.
I want to move a new apartment so I want to have my room but it is impossible.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for the composition today! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
It is a very old apartment.
It is a very old apartment.
>>CORRECT!
So it doesn\'t have a dress room.
So it doesn\'t have a dress room.
>>So, it doesn\'t have a dressing room.
My bedroom is very small because of the closet.
My bedroom is very small because of the closet.
>>CORRECT!
I need only my room for me I don\'t want to share with my husband.
I need only my room for me I don\'t want to share with my husband.
>>CORRECT!
I want to move a new apartment so I want to have my room but it is impossible.
I want to move a new apartment so I want to have my room but it is impossible.
>>I want to move to a new apartment because I want to have my own room but it is impossible.
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