homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you consider yourself lucky?
I have never considered I am lucky. For example, I tend to lose when I\'m playing games that required luck. Also, I haven\'t won any high prize in the lottery, or even I am not good at picking a number when I face a question that I don\'t know about during an exam. That\'s why I don\'t like that I let my job rely on my fate. By the way, I still buy some lottery tickets ocassionally though I don\'t expect so much things happenning due to this.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I also have the same case.
I would be extremely happy if I were lucky in life.
But, I hope you can achieve everything in life!
I have never considered I am lucky.
>>I have never considered myself lucky.
For example, I tend to lose when I\'m playing games that required luck.
>>CORRECT
Also, I haven\'t won any high prize in the lottery, or even I am not good at picking a number when I face a question that I don\'t know about during an exam.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why I don\'t like that I let my job rely on my fate.
>>CORRECT
By the way, I still buy some lottery tickets ocassionally though I don\'t expect so much things happenning due to this.
>>By the way, I still buy some lottery tickets occasionally though I don\'t expect so much things to be happening.
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