homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you could choose between money or life, which will you choose and why?
Can I choose it? I don\'t think it\'s about a problem of choice. I am sure I will choose life because I can make money if I can keep alive. Also, even if it\'s someone else\'s life I would choose the same. I believe that life is much more valuable than money or anything.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for answering!
I also agree.
Life cannot be bought and money is just material things.
What\'s more important is the thing that cannot be replaced.
See you tomorrow!
Can I choose it?
>>CORRECT
I don\'t think it\'s about a problem of choice.
>>CORRECT
I am sure I will choose life because I can make money if I can keep alive.
>>I am sure I will choose life because I can make money if I am kept alive.
Also, even if it\'s someone else\'s life I would choose the same.
>>CORRECT
I believe that life is much more valuable than money or anything.
>>CORRECT
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