homework
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HOMEWORK: If you are made to choose between beauty and intelligence, what would you prefer to have? Why?
i prefer to intelligence, because beauty is can be made by morden surgery.
the present, it\'s important intelligence than beauty.
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Good evening [이름]. It\'s nice to hear your opinion regarding this issue. Thanks.
T. Irene
HOMEWORK: If you are made to choose between beauty and intelligence, what would you prefer to have? Why?
i prefer to intelligence, because beauty is can be made by morden surgery.
>> I prefer intelligence over beauty because beauty can be made by modern surgery.
the present, it\'s important intelligence than beauty.
i prefer to intelligence, because beauty is can be made by morden surgery.
>> I prefer intelligence over beauty because beauty can be made by modern surgery.
the present, it\'s important intelligence than beauty.
>> At present, it\'s more important to be intelligent than beautiful.
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