Homework

2020-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework I ask for help people. I think every day we need to people help. If we make my own decisions, i am more likely to fall into illusion.

Hi Riley!

Thank you for the effort today.

You have worked hard.

I hope that you would continue to practice every day.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I ask for help people.

>> I ask for help from people.

I think every day we need to people help.

>> I think we need other people every day.

If we make my own decisions, i am more likely to fall into illusion.

>> If we make our own decisions, we are more likely to fall into illusion.

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