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2012-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Martina won't probably like the job./You won't definitely be here./He won't be at home./I won't be in Wales next month./I think it won't be good. Don't drive so fast! Slow down before you kill us all! Try not to speak too quiet when you're with Juan. He doesn't understand. I couldn't hear you very hard on the phone. The line was bad. We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was very awful. You shouldn't work so hard. You'll have a heart attack one of these days. My favorite word is smart since last summer. When I knew that smart has meaning of pain, I was shocked. Since then I started thinking why smart has meaning of pain. If you want to be a smart, you make a lot of mistakes first. Thus you'll feel smarting this experience. I think no pains, no gains. However, sometimes I want to no gains rather than pain and smart. I wish I couldn't feel pain. A caterpillar have to endure for a long time to develop into a butterfly. I wonder how many time will my dream come true.

강사 첨삭

HELLO ISABEL! GOOD JOB!   I really appreciated your composition because you perfect your homework! Just keep it up my dear. I knew it! I knew that you are smart! I am very proud of you. -Teacher Chloe (^^,) Martina won\'t probably like the job. >>Correct You won\'t definitely be here. >>Correct He won\'t be at home. >>Correct I won\'t be in Wales next month. >>Correct I think it won\'t be good. >>CorrectDon\'t drive so fast! Slow down before you kill us all! >> Don\'t drive so quick! Slow down before you kill us all! Try not to speak too quiet when you\'re with Juan. He doesn\'t understand. >> Try not to speak too fast when you\'re with Juan. He doesn\'t understand. I couldn\'t hear you very hard on the phone. The line was bad. >> I couldn\'t hear you very good on the phone. The line was bad.We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was very awful. >> Correct You shouldn\'t work so hard. You\'ll have a heart attack one of these days. >>CorrectMy favorite word is smart since last summer. >>Correct When I knew that smart has meaning of pain, I was shocked. >>When I found out that smart has the meaning of pain, I was shocked. Since then I started thinking why smart has meaning of pain. >>I started to think why smart means \'pain\'  If you want to be a smart, you make a lot of mistakes first. >> If you want to be smart, you have to make mistakes first. Thus you\'ll feel smarting this experience. >>Thus, you will be smart with mistakes. I think no pains, no gains. >>As what the saying goes \'No pains, No gains\'.  However, sometimes I want to no gains rather than pain and smart. >>But sometimes, I feel like I don\'t want to gain something rather than to have pain. I wish I couldn\'t feel pain. >>Correct  A caterpillar have to endure for a long time to develop into a butterfly. >>Correct  I wonder how many time will my dream come true. >>I am really thinking if my dreams will come true.

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