homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Martina won't probably like the job./You won't definitely be here./He won't be at home./I won't be in Wales next month./I think it won't be good.
Don't drive so fast! Slow down before you kill us all!
Try not to speak too quiet when you're with Juan. He doesn't understand.
I couldn't hear you very hard on the phone. The line was bad.
We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was very awful.
You shouldn't work so hard. You'll have a heart attack one of these days.
My favorite word is smart since last summer. When I knew that smart has meaning of pain, I was shocked. Since then I started thinking why smart has meaning of pain. If you want to be a smart, you make a lot of mistakes first. Thus you'll feel smarting this experience. I think no pains, no gains. However, sometimes I want to no gains rather than pain and smart. I wish I couldn't feel pain. A caterpillar have to endure for a long time to develop into a butterfly. I wonder how many time will my dream come true.
강사 첨삭
HELLO ISABEL! GOOD JOB! I really appreciated your composition because you perfect your homework! Just keep it up my dear. I knew it! I knew that you are smart! I am very proud of you.
-Teacher Chloe (^^,)
Martina won\'t probably like the job.
>>Correct
You won\'t definitely be here.
>>Correct
He won\'t be at home.
>>Correct
I won\'t be in Wales next month.
>>Correct
I think it won\'t be good.
>>CorrectDon\'t drive so fast! Slow down before you kill us all!
>> Don\'t drive so quick! Slow down before you kill us all!
Try not to speak too quiet when you\'re with Juan. He doesn\'t understand.
>> Try not to speak too fast when you\'re with Juan. He doesn\'t understand.
I couldn\'t hear you very hard on the phone. The line was bad.
>> I couldn\'t hear you very good on the phone. The line was bad.We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was very awful.
>> Correct
You shouldn\'t work so hard. You\'ll have a heart attack one of these days.
>>CorrectMy favorite word is smart since last summer.
>>Correct
When I knew that smart has meaning of pain, I was shocked.
>>When I found out that smart has the meaning of pain, I was shocked.
Since then I started thinking why smart has meaning of pain.
>>I started to think why smart means \'pain\'
If you want to be a smart, you make a lot of mistakes first.
>> If you want to be smart, you have to make mistakes first.
Thus you\'ll feel smarting this experience.
>>Thus, you will be smart with mistakes.
I think no pains, no gains.
>>As what the saying goes \'No pains, No gains\'.
However, sometimes I want to no gains rather than pain and smart.
>>But sometimes, I feel like I don\'t want to gain something rather than to have pain.
I wish I couldn\'t feel pain.
>>Correct
A caterpillar have to endure for a long time to develop into a butterfly.
>>Correct
I wonder how many time will my dream come true.
>>I am really thinking if my dreams will come true.
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