homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you live to work or work to live?
I am sure that I don\'t want to live to work and I work to live. Also, I believe that work should be used for a tool on how your life makes better. There are plenty of things to enjoy as many as we cannot do all in my life and our life is too short. I think people who live to work are pathetic. However, if someone only enjoys playing without working is more pathetic then people who live to work. All of us need to work in some parts of society even if the position cannot make money, such as a student because your job proves you a member of this society.
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I am sure that I don\'t want to live to work and I work to live.
>>CORRECT
Also, I believe that work should be used for a tool on how your life makes better.
>>Also, I believe that work should be used as a tool on how to make life better.
There are plenty of things to enjoy as many as we cannot do all in my life and our life is too short.
>>CORRECT
I think people who live to work are pathetic.
>>CORRECT
However, if someone only enjoys playing without working is more pathetic then people who live to work.
>>However, if someone only enjoys playing without working it is more pathetic than people who live to work.
All of us need to work in some parts of society even if the position cannot make money, such as a student because your job proves you a member of this society.
>>CORRECT
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