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2020-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

What was the most frightening experience you\'ve had? I think it was when i was 8 years old went to China, my aunt and i went to a ghost house. Because I hate scary things.

강사 첨삭

Hi Paul! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework! 

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


I think it was when i was 8 years old went to China, my aunt and i went to a ghost house.
>>I think it was when I was 8 years old when we went to China. My aunt and I went to a ghost house.
OR>>It was when my aunt and I went to a ghost house in China when I was just 8 years old.

Because I hate scary things.
>>CORRECT

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