Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Are online dating sites just a scam, or can they form lasting relationships?
A. I think the online dating sites are mostly a scam but sometimes it makes real couple. One of my friends had used an dating application where she met a guy and had a relationship for several years. She used the app for fun at first and didn\'t even expect to meet someone. It occurred me to think of that not all of online dating sites are scam. But we have to be always careful on it. Too much scams and crimes are happening by this way. I think it\'s better to make a relationship with other by face to face.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for taking the time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I definitely agree with you. I also know some people who used this site and fortunately they found the love of their life, got married, but I\'m not really sure if they are living the life they wanted with their partners they found online. But what we have to remember just like what you have said is to always be on guard and be careful! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think the online dating sites are mostly a scam but sometimes it makes
real couple.
>>CORRECT (*couples)
One of my friends had used an dating application where she
met a guy and had a relationship for several years.
>>One of my friends had used an online dating site where she met a guy whom she had a relationship with for several years.
She used the app
for fun at first and didn\'t even expect to meet someone.
>>CORRECT
It occurred me
to think of that not all of online dating sites are scam.
>>It made me changed my perception about it and made me accept that not all online dating sites are scams.
But we have to
be always careful on it.
>>But we have to be always careful about it.
Too much scams and crimes are happening by
this way.
>>CORRECT
I think it\'s better to make a relationship with other by face
to face.
>>CORRECT
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