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I like to change my sound that I like. My dream is a rapper but I wanna have a voice that is good for singing songs. I also wanna destroy this corona virus toooooo😡😡
( I think I changed my dream to virus killer ha )
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Hey there corona virus killer! hahaha I hope we can really kill that virus!!!!
I like to change my sound that I like.
>> I would like to change the sounds that I like.
My dream is a rapper but I wanna have a voice that is good for singing songs.
>> My dream is to become a rapper but I wanna have a voice that is good for singing songs.
I also wanna destroy this corona virus toooooo😡😡
>> I would also want to destroy the corona virus!
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