homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Which country\'s culture is the most interesting to you?Why?
I think there are several countries that have interesting cultures and Korea is one of them. For example, Koreans don\'t like that someone writes down our name with a red-colored pen. We think the behavior represents that someone wants the owner of the name to die so it\'s regarded as a kind of curse. By the way, I think the most interesting culture is the Chinese\'s food culture. I think they would eat almost anything. The most shocking food that I heard is \'Three Squeaks\' a dish that is made of live baby mice. I heard that the Chinese made this name because the mice cry 3 times while they get eaten.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for answering my question!
It\'s so weird! I feel so bad for the mice.
I hope you study well!
Perfect homework #4!
Have a good night.
I think there are several countries that have interesting cultures and Korea is one of them.
>>CORRECT
For example, Koreans don\'t like that someone writes down our name with a red-colored pen.
>>CORRECT
We think the behavior represents that someone wants the owner of the name to die so it\'s regarded as a kind of curse.
>>CORRECT
By the way, I think the most interesting culture is the Chinese\'s food culture.
>>CORRECT
I think they would eat almost anything.
>>CORRECT
The most shocking food that I heard is \'Three Squeaks\' a dish that is made of live baby mice.
>>CORRECT
I heard that the Chinese made this name because the mice cry 3 times while they get eaten.
>>CORRECT
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