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Yeah. I think when I was a kid, I thought the world is very easy but after I grow a little bit, I understood that world is too hard(⌒-⌒; ). I think when I grow and grow, the life will be hard, and hard.
But I’m happy!
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I am thankful for your kind of thinking dear.
Yeah. I think when I was a kid, I thought the world is very easy but after I grow a little bit, I understood that world is too hard(⌒-⌒; ).
>> When I was younger, I thought the world is a very easy place to live with. But, when I grew up a little, I fully understood the world.
I think when I grow and grow, the life will be hard, and hard.But I’m happy!
>> I think when I grow up, life will be harder but I am happy!
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