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2020-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What kind of legacy do you want to leave? I\'ve never thought about my legacy that I want to leave. However, I want to make something useful for people. The things would be related to my business and it\'d be a program or a machine or a technique. I haven\'t decided yet though I have several candidates. First, it\'s an operating system that works every machine. You can use your own OS whatever machine you use. The point of this OS is that you don\'t even need to connect to the internet to identify you. Second, it\'s a technique that inspects fake videos. These days, with AI tech, the technique of fake videos is developed a lot and it causes many problems, such as deep fake of celebrities. I expect that this kind of problem would happen more and more so that we need to develop the technique to prevent this situation. I have more ideas for my business and all of them are not possible yet but I will make them someday.

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I\'ve never thought about my legacy that I want to leave. 
>>CORRECT

However, I want to make something useful for people. 
>>CORRECT

The things would be related to my business and it\'d be a program or a machine or a technique. 
>>The things would be related to my business and it would either be a program, a machine, or a technique.

I haven\'t decided yet though I have several candidates.
>>CORRECT

 First, it\'s an operating system that works every machine.
>>CORRECT

 You can use your own OS whatever machine you use. 
>>You can use your own OS or whatever machine you see.

The point of this OS is that you don\'t even need to connect to the internet to identify you. 
>>The point of this OS is that you don\'t even need to connect to the internet to identify yourself.

Second, it\'s a technique that inspects fake videos. 
>>CORRECT

These days, with AI tech, the technique of fake videos is developed a lot and it causes many problems, such as deep fake of celebrities.
>>CORRECT

 I expect that this kind of problem would happen more and more so that we need to develop the technique to prevent this situation. 
>>CORRECT

I have more ideas for my business and all of them are not possible yet but I will make them someday.
>>CORRECT

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