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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Which is more important, intelligence or common sense and why?
I think intelligence is more important than common sense. If you\'re intelligent enough then it\'s way easier and faster to grow up your common sense. Also, you can remember all things longer than normal people. However, you always need to try to learn it. If you don\'t try to learn anything you\'d get worse than normal people who have common sense. This is the point. If you want to be better than anyone, you should keep studying and trying. This is no matter about his intelligence or what he knows, it\'s about effort.
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I think intelligence is more important than common sense.
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If you\'re intelligent enough then it\'s way easier and faster to grow up your common sense.
>>CORRECT
Also, you can remember all things longer than normal people.
>>CORRECT
However, you always need to try to learn it.
>>CORRECT
If you don\'t try to learn anything you\'d get worse than normal people who have common sense.
>>CORRECT
This is the point.
>>CORRECT
If you want to be better than anyone, you should keep studying and trying.
>>CORRECT
This is no matter about his intelligence or what he knows, it\'s about effort.
>>CORRECT
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