Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you get rid of unnecessary objects and kept only what are essential in your home this pandemic?
- Well, I did not. I like to collect I like to watches, shoes, hats, home appliances, etc.
What can you say about being minimalist?
- I think it\'s practical, but I\'m not a minimalist.
My cousin says, when you don\'t make enough money, don\'t try to save too much money.
A little money doesn\'t make you rich, life is so boring.
Don\'t just spend too much money and rather enjoy your life while enjoying what others do.
Instead, if you work hard, you will have many opportunities.
You can\'t work hard if life isn\'t pleasant.
Only when you are happy can you work hard and your family be happy.
Save hard if you get a chance to make a lot of money.
Then one day you\'ll be rich.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Mr. [이름] [이름]!
~Lucy
- Well, I did not.
>>CORRECT!
I like to collect I like to watches, shoes, hats, home appliances, etc.
>> I like to collect watches, shoes, hats, home appliances, etc.
- I think it\'s practical, but I\'m not a minimalist.
>>CORRECT!
My cousin says, when you don\'t make enough money, don\'t try to save too much money.
>>CORRECT!
A little money doesn\'t make you rich, life is so boring.>>CORRECT!
Don\'t just spend too much money and rather enjoy your life while enjoying what others do.>>CORRECT!
Instead, if you work hard, you will have many opportunities.>>CORRECT!
You can\'t work hard if life isn\'t pleasant.>>CORRECT!
Only when you are happy can you work hard and your family be happy.>>Only when you are happy can you work hard and your family will be happy.
Save hard if you get a chance to make a lot of money.
>>CORRECT!
Then one day you\'ll be rich.>>CORRECT!
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