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2020-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What do you think of Starbucks? Starbucks is the most famous franchised cafe in the world. I could see it almost everywhere in the capital cities in most countries. Even in Korea, there is Starbucks every corner of the streets. I don\'t know why it\'s so famous but I am sure that it\'s not about taste. I think the taste is not bad but also I cannot find any special thing in there. I say it has normal taste but this brand made its image very well. When it started to spread in this country many people thought that Starbucks sells tasty coffee even they don\'t know how tastes coffee. Also, Starbucks was considered a high-priced brand in Korea, and that\'s how it grew its value. These days it offers Starbucks goods if customers drink enough cups of coffee. I saw many stores that people made a line to get the goods in the early morning, like 5 o\'clock. I think its marketing was the main factor to succeed to grow up like this.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your ideas!
I also like Starbucks!
And, it\'s most because of it\'s brand positioning and strategy that\'s how it made it big!
Great answer! 9/10 ! 


Starbucks is the most famous franchised cafe in the world. 
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I could see it almost everywhere in the capital cities in most countries.
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 Even in Korea, there is Starbucks every corner of the streets. 
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I don\'t know why it\'s so famous but I am sure that it\'s not about taste.
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 I think the taste is not bad but also I cannot find any special thing in there. 
>>CORRECT

I say it has normal taste but this brand made its image very well. 
>>CORRECT

When it started to spread in this country many people thought that Starbucks sells tasty coffee even they don\'t know how tastes coffee. 
>>\\when it started to spread in this country, many people thought that Starbucks sells tasty coffee even if they don\'t know how coffee tastes.

Also, Starbucks was considered a high-priced brand in Korea, and that\'s how it grew its value.
>>CORRECT

 These days it offers Starbucks goods if customers drink enough cups of coffee. 
>>CORRECT

I saw many stores that people made a line to get the goods in the early morning, like 5 o\'clock. 
>>CORRECT

I think its marketing was the main factor to succeed to grow up like this.
>>CORRECT

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