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2020-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. When our daughter found out that our cat was missing, she burst into tears and couldn\'t be stopped. 2. Our boss is often angry and lose his temper when things go wrong. 3. If she never posts anything on her personal website, she run the risk of alienating her fans. 4. Not everything happens on its own. Sometimes you have to make an effort to get things done. 5. Why don\'t you take a break ? You\'ve been working so hard recently. 6. He has been the race preparing for months. He wants to break his own record and be the best in the world. 7. His car broke down, so I give him a lift to the nearest garage. 8. Politicians often think we should raise taxes in order to get more money to spend. 9. The new teacher didn\'t meet the headmaster\'s expectations and was fired after only two months on the job. 10.The couple get a divorce only a few months after their wedding. 11.Dad keep his promise and took me to Disneyland in the summer holidays. 12.We catch a glimpse of the famous...

강사 첨삭

Hello JT,


It was really nice to talk with you everyday. I can feel that you are eager to learn how to speak English well.

It is a good thing because it means that you can improve very fast.

Take care!!!!

T. Jeny


1. When our daughter found out that our cat was missing, she burst into tears and couldn\'t be stopped.
>>correct
2. Our boss is often angry and lose his temper when things go wrong.
>>correct
3. If she never posts anything on her personal website, she run the risk of alienating her fans.
>>correct
4. Not everything happens on its own. Sometimes you have to make an effort to get things done.
>>correct
5. Why don\'t you take a break ? You\'ve been working so hard recently.
>>correct
6. He has been the race preparing for months. He wants to break his own record and be the best in the world.
>>correct
7. His car broke down, so I give him a lift to the nearest garage.
>>correct
8. Politicians often think we should raise taxes in order to get more money to spend.
>>correct
9. The new teacher didn\'t meet the headmaster\'s expectations and was fired after only two months on the job.
>>correct
10.The couple get a divorce only a few months after their wedding.
>>correct
11.Dad keep his promise and took me to Disneyland in the summer holidays.
>>correct
12.We catch a glimpse of the famous...
>>We caught a glimpse of the famous football player as we came down the stairs.

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