Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-If you could be anywhere, where would you go?- (^-^)
I will go to universe with my family and my best friend^^
l want to feel no gravity~!!
Beacause it will be very fun~^^
It is my bucketlist~~~=)
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
WOW! I would really love to do that too! Travel in space and experience \"no gravity\"! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I will go to universe with my family and my best friend^^
>>I will travel the space with my family and my best friend.
l want to feel no gravity~!!
>>CORRECT OR
>>I want to know how it feels like floating in air.
Because it will be very fun~^^
>>CORRECT
It is my bucket list~~~=)
>>CORRECT
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