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2020-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

In my opinion, homeschooling is not effective to elementary school student or middle school student Children have less concentration than adults. So if there is no teacher before them, they can play prank. And In spite of developing sociality is important to children, There is no chance to learn sociality in homeschooling But more than highschool student can apply homeschooling, because they can manage their time and progress.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]~

Thank you so much for this. ^^
Please review these vocabulary words:

1. in spite of- even though there is something bad.

ex: In spite of his injury, Charlie will play on Saturday.

2. sociability- the quality of liking to meet other people

See you tomorrow! ^^

- T. Rina

1. In my opinion, homeschooling is not effective to elementary school student or middle school student
>> In my opinion, homeschooling is not effective to elementary school students or middle school students.

2. Children have less concentration than adults.
>> CORRECT!

3. So if there is no teacher before them, they can play prank.
>> So if there is no teacher before them, they can do pranks.

OR: So if there is no teacher looking after them, they can play.

4. And In spite of developing sociality is important to children, There is no chance to learn sociality in homeschooling
>> And developing sociability is important to children. Unfortunately, there is no chance to learn sociability in homeschooling.

5. But more than highschool student can apply homeschooling, because they can manage their time and progress.

>> But, high school students can apply for homeschooling because they can manage their time and progress.

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