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In my case, eating delicious foods and listening music is best cure for me.
And sometimes drinking beer make my body and sour relax.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]~
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I agree that delicious food make us happy. ^^
I agree that delicious food make us happy. ^^
Enjoy your weekend~
See you next week! ^^
See you next week! ^^
- T. Rina
1. In my case, eating delicious foods and listening music is best cure for me.
>> In my case, eating delicious foods and listening to music are best cures for me.
2. And sometimes drinking beer make my body and sour relax.
>> And sometimes drinking beer makes my body relax.
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