Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-If you could do anything in a week, what would you do?- (^-^)
I will go to everland~
Beacause i want to go to everland with my friend~
But now we can not go to the everland by Corona 19 ....=
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thanks for taking the time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts as well. Yes, if it\'s not for this pandemic we should have been somewhere enjoying our vacation and our free time, right? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I will go to Everland~
>>CORRECT
Beacause i want to go to everland with my friend~
>>Because I want to go to Everland with my friend. (Your sentence is correct but you mispelled \"because\", and capitalize \"I\" and \"Everland\".)
But now we can not go to the everland by Corona 19 ....=
>>But, we can not go to Everland because of the corona situation.
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