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2020-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He started composing his own symphonies at the age of 9. 2. I\'m not in a good mood today, so please leave me alone. 3. Has anyone by chance found my red fountain pen? I lost it yesterday. 4. Shorter skirts were in fashion a few years ago but they\'re not anymoretoday. 5. Mom told me I had to be home by midnight, at the latest . 6. He was questioned under stress so don\'t believe everything he says. 7. By the time someone got to the scene of the accident, the car was on fire . 8. I tried to convince her to take part in the course, but all my efforts were in vain . 9. In conclusion , I don\'t think we should hire too many new workers. 10.The headmaster cancelled the meeting at short notice because he had to besomewhere else.

강사 첨삭


Hello [이름],

I do hope that you can achieve all of your goals this year because I know you can learn from all of this experiences. 
I am very happy to read your goals in life because this activities are beneficial for you. In addition, it can also help you improve you skills in English, as a result you\'ll be successful in life. Thank you very much!!!

T. Jeny

1. He started composing his own symphonies at the age of 9.
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2. I\'m not in a good mood today, so please leave me alone.
>>correct
3. Has anyone by chance found my red fountain pen? I lost it yesterday.
>>correct
4. Shorter skirts were in fashion a few years ago but they\'re not anymore today.
>>correct
5. Mom told me I had to be home by midnight, at the latest .
>>correct
6. He was questioned under stress so don\'t believe everything he says.
>>correct
7. By the time someone got to the scene of the accident, the car was on fire .
>>correct
8. I tried to convince her to take part in the course, but all my efforts were in vain .
>>correct
9. In conclusion , I don\'t think we should hire too many new workers.
>>correct
10.The headmaster cancelled the meeting at short notice because he had to besomewhere else.
>>correct

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