homework

2020-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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HOMEWORK: Complete the sentences with the correct form of the words. 1. Up to now voters in Florida have always supported the Republican candidate 2. The police took down personal information, like my name, address and occupation 3. While most people in developed countries retire at the age of 65, some still work on because they need something to do. 4. We asked the tour guide if it was safe to walk in the city at night. 5. The head of the personnel department asked me what professional I had. 6. Many students in English schools must wear school uniform 7. The TV station sent a camera crew to cover the events at the stadium. 8. scientist have found out that there is a connection between stress and the way you behave in private.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름] !

I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.

I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^

Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake.

~T. Jeny

1. Up to now voters in Florida have always supported the Republican candidate

>>correct
2. The police took down personal information, like my name, address and occupation

>>correct
3. While most people in developed countries retire at the age of 65, some still work on because they need something to do.

>>correct
4. We asked the tour guide if it was safe to walk in the city at night.

>>correct
5. The head of the personnel department asked me what professional
I had.

>>The head of the personnel department asked me what professional qualifications I had.
6. Many students in English schools must wear school uniform

>>correct
7. The TV station sent a camera crew to cover the events at the stadium.

>>correct
8. scientist have found out that there is a connection between stress and the
way you behave in private.

>>correct

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