Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my best character looks like a witch!!
She is too poor because people broke her house!
These days, the people will kill the witches like bugs!!
Witches started to be extinct beacause of people!!!
Witches are too poor😭
강사 첨삭
I think I am a witch!!
I think my best character looks like a witch!!
>> I think the best character for me looks like a witch!!
She is too poor because people broke her house!
>> Correct.
These days, the people will kill the witches like bugs!!
>> These days, people will kill the witches like bugs!!
Witches started to be extinct beacause of people!!!
>> Witches started to be extinct because of people killing them!!!
Witches are too poor😭
>> Poor witches.
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