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If mars was livable, would you accept a one-way ticket there?
I don\'t want to buy a one-way ticket to mars but I would buy a round ticket If it\'s possible. Because I have my family, friends, and wealth here. I don\'t want to go and leave all the things that I can be with for the rest of my life. However, I am curious about life in mars so if I have a chance to buy a round trip ticket to mars, I would buy it.
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Thank you for answering!
It would seem very interesting to know what living in mars would be like.
Have a nice day!
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I don\'t want to buy a one-way ticket to mars but I would buy a round ticket If it\'s possible.
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Because I have my family, friends, and wealth here.
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I don\'t want to go and leave all the things that I can be with for the rest of my life.
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However, I am curious about life in mars so if I have a chance to buy a round trip ticket to mars, I would buy it.
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