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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
When you travel abroad, do people expect you to return with gifts? Why?
I don\'t think most people expect a gift when I travel abroad. However, my mother always wants me to buy some gifts because I can buy some duty-free goods at the airport. My mother is interested in cosmetics as the other women and she wants to buy it at a lower price. That\'s why whenever I tell my mother that I am going to travel abroad, she makes a list of the cosmetics that I can find at the duty-free shops. One day, I felt annoyed because at that time so many friends wanted me to buy something in the airport duty-free shop. I was so busy come-and-go inside the airport and I was exhausted. After that, I tend to not tell girls about my planned abroad trip.
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Hi there [이름]!
Wow!
That\'s amazing! I heard about that news from another student as well and I wanted to go to airports just to buy cosmetics too! haha!
But anyway, I really think you are such a good son and friend to go out of your way and buy things for your family and friends.
Have a nice weekend!
I don\'t think most people expect a gift when I travel abroad.
>>CORRECT
However, my mother always wants me to buy some gifts because I can buy some duty-free goods at the airport.
>>CORRECT
My mother is interested in cosmetics as the other women and she wants to buy it at a lower price.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why whenever I tell my mother that I am going to travel abroad, she makes a list of the cosmetics that I can find at the duty-free shops.
>>CORRECT
One day, I felt annoyed because at that time so many friends wanted me to buy something in the airport duty-free shop.
>>CORRECT
I was so busy come-and-go inside the airport and I was exhausted.
>>I was so busy coming and going inside the airport and I was exhausted.
After that, I tend to not tell girls about my planned abroad trip.
>>CORRECT
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