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HOMEWORK: Do you think technology (mobile phones, computers/ robots) made life easier and more convenient OR did it make life harder and more complicated? Give examples to support your answer.
I think technology made my life easy.
because I can\'t use technology very well, just I use it moderately.
example, mobile phone has a lot of functions, but I can use several function.
The more I know and the more complicated.
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HOMEWORK: Do you think technology (mobile phones, computers/ robots) made life easier and more convenient OR did it make life harder and more complicated? Give examples to support your answer.
I think technology made my life easy.
>>> Correct.
because I can\'t use technology very well, just I use it moderately.
>>> Because I don\'t use technology that much. I\'m just a moderate user.
example, mobile phone has a lot of functions, but I can use several function.
>>> For example, the mobile phone has a lot of functions but I can only use a few of them.
The more I know and the more complicated
>>> I think that the more I know, the more complicated it will be.
I think technology made my life easy.
>>> Correct.
because I can\'t use technology very well, just I use it moderately.
>>> Because I don\'t use technology that much. I\'m just a moderate user.
example, mobile phone has a lot of functions, but I can use several function.
>>> For example, the mobile phone has a lot of functions but I can only use a few of them.
The more I know and the more complicated
>>> I think that the more I know, the more complicated it will be.
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