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The scariest thing in the hospital for me is a. hot, a shot has a big long needle and think about a long needle is going in your body and blod it will hurt very much.
It help\'s you but a shot is very ache and it is more ache when the shot is all finished .
So I don\'t like shots in the future I want shot will not, ache or hurt or you can eat a medicine and the medicine is a shot in the future it will be good I wish some day the no ache shot works.
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Hello Ruby!
Wow, your homework is getting longer! Way to go! Thanks for sharing your ideas about the homework topics I give you. It\'s always a delight reading your responses. ^ ^
-Rachel
The scariest thing in the hospital for me is a shot.
>> The scariest thing in the hospital for me is getting a shot.
a shot has a big long needle and think about a long needle is going in your body and blod it will hurt very much.
>> They use big and long needles when you get a shot. Think about a long needle entering your body. There will be blood and it will hurt very much.
It help\'s you but a shot is very ache and it is more ache when the shot is all finished .>> Getting a shot helps your body get stronger but it is painful and you feel more pain after taking the shot.
So I don\'t like shots in the future
So I don\'t like shots in the future
>> So I don\'t like shots in the future.
I want shot will not, ache or hurt or you can eat a medicine and the medicine is a shot in the future it will be good I wish some day the no ache shot works
>> I hope shot won\'t be painful or you can just take a medicine instead because I don\'t like the pain from getting a shot.
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