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학생이 쓴 원문
Fishing is a common hobby in my country.
But I\'m not enjoy fishing.
Because I feel that it is very boring.
When I doing active and creative things, I feel fun.
So every weekday, I do a yoga and every saturday, I drew the painting.
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Fishing is a common hobby in my country.
>> Fishing is a common hobby of people in my country.
But I\'m not enjoy fishing.
But I\'m not enjoy fishing.
>> However, I don\'t enjoy it.
Because I feel that it is very boring.
Because I feel that it is very boring.
>> This is because I feel that it is very boring.
When I doing active and creative things, I feel fun.
When I doing active and creative things, I feel fun.
>> Whenever I do active and creative things, I always have fun.
So every weekday, I do a yoga and every saturday, I drew the painting.
So every weekday, I do a yoga and every saturday, I drew the painting.
>> That\'s why on weekdays, I do yoga and every Saturday, I draw paintings.
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