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I wold like to go to austraila.
be cuse there are yummy foods and many animals like dingoes kanngaroos,and kookaburas.
I like the kookaburas they make lathing souns.
and kangaroos can jump very hi so I Iike austrailan food and animals.
and in the desert you can sand ski in the sand of the desert then you can ride a bus and you can goto the forist to so I wold like to go to australia
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby!
Oh, I like kookaburras too! The sound they make is interesting and it makes me want to laugh too. ^ ^
-Rachel
I wold like to go to austraila.
>> I would like to go to Australia.
be cuse there are yummy foods and many animals like dingoes kanngaroos,and kookaburas.
be cuse there are yummy foods and many animals like dingoes kanngaroos,and kookaburas.
>> Because there are yummy food and many animals such as dingoes, kangaroos and kookaburras.
I like the kookaburas they make lathing souns.
I like the kookaburas they make lathing souns.
>> I like kookaburras because they make a laughing sound.
and kangaroos can jump very hi so I Iike austrailan food and animals.
and kangaroos can jump very hi so I Iike austrailan food and animals.
>> And kangaroos can jump very high, so I like Australian food and animals.
and in the desert you can sand ski in the sand of the desert then you can ride a bus and you can goto the forist to so I wold like to go to australia
and in the desert you can sand ski in the sand of the desert then you can ride a bus and you can goto the forist to so I wold like to go to australia
>> In the desert, you can do sand skiing, ride a bus and go somewhere, so if you are a tourist, you should go to Australia.
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