homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the best way to keep your body healthy?
First, you have to sleep enough time.
second, you have to eat healty food.
third, you have to exercise everyday.
If you do this, you can keep your body healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Paul! Great job with your homework today!
Until the next one!
See you in class next week!
~Teacher Sheila
First, you have to sleep enough time.
>>First, you have to have enough sleep.
second, you have to eat healty food.
>>Second, you have to eat healthy food.
third, you have to exercise everyday.
>>Third, you have to exercise every day.
If you do this, you can keep your body healthy.
>>If you do these, you can keep your body healthy.
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