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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you won the lottery, would you still pursue your profession now?
I would pursue my profession even if I won the lottery ticket. First, I think a human needs to keep working until he died because without working the life wouldn\'t be meaningful. We don\'t have to accomplish great things but at least we should do something for humanity and nature. For example, cleaning the street, recycling, making a great product, so on. Also, even if I won the lottery, it wouldn\'t be enough to spend it for the whole life. In fact, I would feel the money will never be enough.
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Hello [이름]!
Very nice answer!
I also agree.
Our needs are never-ending.
Have a good night!
I would pursue my profession even if I won the lottery ticket.
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First, I think a human needs to keep working until he died because without working the life wouldn\'t be meaningful.
>>First, I think a human needs to keep working until he dies because without working the life wouldn\'t be meaningful.
We don\'t have to accomplish great things but at least we should do something for humanity and nature.
>>CORRECT
For example, cleaning the street, recycling, making a great product, so on.
>>CORRECT
Also, even if I won the lottery, it wouldn\'t be enough to spend it for the whole life.
>>CORRECT
In fact, I would feel the money will never be enough.
>>CORRECT
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