Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion To take care of parents is not family duty these days
Because of individualism, Patrnts and children consider nursing hospital more than getting together.
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Good evening, [이름]~
Thank you for sharing your opinion. ^^
See you tomorrow in class. ^^
- T. Rina
1. In my opinion To take care of parents is not family duty these days
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
2. Because of individualism, Patrnts and children consider nursing hospital more than getting together.
>> Because of individualism, parents and children consider going to nursing homes more than living together.
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