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I have lots of best days!! I’m gonna talk about one of that. I think I went to Philippines and caught fishes with my mom, brother, and aunt. I was veeeeeery excited because I caught
fishes!!
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You have visited the Philippines? Wow!!
I have lots of best days!!
>> Correct.
I’m gonna talk about one of that.
>> I’m gonna talk about one of those.
I think I went to Philippines and caught fishes with my mom, brother, and aunt.
>> I think one of the best days for me would be when I went to the Philippines and caught fishes with my mom, brother, and aunt.
I was veeeeeery excited because I caught
fishes!!
>> I was very excited because I caught some fishes!!
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