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I don’t really had a weirdest thing that happened but I had a weirdest dream. I was a fly. I was at a big old house. I was also with other flies. There were my friends too. Some of them was died by an old lady and I and some of my friends got alive. One of my friend was killed at the oven fire!! 1~2 of my friend and I just got alive and my dream ended.
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This is pretty weird indeed!!
I don’t really had a weirdest thing that happened but I had a weirdest dream.
>> I don’t really have a weird experience but I had the weirdest dream.
I was a fly.
>> Correct.
I was at a big old house.
>> Correct.
I was also with other flies.
>> Correct.
There were my friends too.
>> My friends were there too.
Some of them was died by an old lady and I and some of my friends got alive.
>> Some of them died because of an old lady but some of my friends who were flies, got out alive.
One of my friend was killed at the oven fire!! 1~2 of my friend and I just got alive and my dream ended.
>> One of my friends was killed at the oven with fire!! I think one or two of my friends and I just got alive and my dream ended.
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