Homework
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What would you rather do; climb the highest mountain or swim the deepest depth of the ocean? Why?- (^-^)
I want to swim the deepest depth of the ocean~
Beacause I hate climb mountain;;;
So I will swimming in the ocean^^
But I also scary about deep ocean;;
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I really appreciate it!
I want to swim the deepest depth of the ocean~
You did your best here but I know you can do better! ^ ^ I think we are opposite. I\'d rather climb the mountain than swim very deep. I am really afraid of the deep dark water and besides, I don\'t know how to swim! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I want to swim the deepest depth of the ocean~
>>CORRECT
Because I hate climb mountain;;;
Because I hate climb mountain;;;
>>Because I hate climbing a mountain.
So I will swimming in the ocean^^
So I will swimming in the ocean^^
>>CORRECT OR
>>So, I prefer swimming in the ocean.
But I also scary about deep ocean;;
But I also scary about deep ocean;;
>>But, I\'m also scared of the deep ocean.
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