Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I can’t live without my phone and parents. My parents bring up me so I need them. I also need my phone because when I’m in a danger, I need to call to my parents or 911. I also need to have online classes and games too!
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강사 첨삭
That is a smart answer!
I can’t live without my phone and parents.
>> I can’t live without my phone and my parents.
My parents bring up me so I need them.
>> My parents brought me up in this world, so I need them.
I also need my phone because when I’m in a danger, I need to call to my parents or 911.
>> Correct.
I also need to have online classes and games too!
>> I also need to have online classes and have some games too!
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