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2020-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hello [이름]!!!
Good attitude!! We have to overcome all challenges in learning new things.
You just have to upgrade our perspective in discovering new things!!
Take care
Have a nice holiday!!!
T. Jeny

What is the most difficult change you have ever had to make?

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In my case, there are many habits that I have to change. 

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And I know that it’s really hard to fix, so there are a few changes that I have done. 

>>And I know that it’s really hard to fix, so I have done few changes.

It means it’s called process until now. 

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From now, I will tell you about the most difficult change I’ve ever had to make. 

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It’s about my fingernails. 

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When I was young kid, I always have a habit that bite my fingernails. So it makes my hands ugly. 

>>When I was a young kid, I always have a habit of biting my fingernails. So it made my hands ugly. 

I really try to fix it, but it’s really hard for me.

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 I knew that I have to change, but whenever I feel nervous or get embarrassed, I always bite it.

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 Even more, I couldn’t even notice I bite. 

>>Even more, I couldn’t even notice that I\'m biting my fingernails.

But when I turned into 20, I really realized this is not only bad for looking, but also my health. 

>>But when I turned 20, I realized that it doesn\'t only look bad but also my health. 

So I fixed my habit this year. 

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Start was really hard for me, but when I see my fingernails are getting pretty, it makes me happy. 

>>At first, it was really hard for me, but when I see my fingernails are getting pretty, it makes me happy. 

And until now, my fingernail is safe from my tooth. Kkkkkk 

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