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I’ll go to the waterpark with my friends when I can but I can’t so maybe I’ll gonna go to my friend’s house or something. I really wanna go to the waterpark with my friends like some years ago. I think all of the people in the world are too poor because of the corona virus!! Maybe when corona will be worse, I’ll even not go to my friend’s house!!!!!
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I think you should do something new in your house every day. By doing so, you won\'t get bored that much! :D
I’ll go to the waterpark with my friends when I can but I can’t so maybe I’ll gonna go to my friend’s house or something.
>> I’ll go to the waterpark with my friends when I can, but I can’t, so maybe I’ll just go to my friend’s house or something.
I really wanna go to the waterpark with my friends like some years ago.
>> Correct.
I think all of the people in the world are too poor because of the corona virus!!
>> I think, all of the people in the world are too poor because of the corona virus!!
Maybe when corona will be worse, I’ll even not go to my friend’s house!!!!!
>> Maybe, when corona will get worse, I won\'t even go to my friend’s house!!!!!
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