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2020-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I want to change korean education system. I studied by rote when I was a student. I didn\'t know why I study. Before studing, student gets to recognize reason why you have to study. It is that I want to change.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
We still need to focus on the patterns of your sentences.
You\'re getting the hang of it little by little.
It just takes more practice and you\'ll definitely get there.
Have a great weekend!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to change korean education system.
>> I want to change the Korean education system.
I studied by rote when I was a student.
>> I had a study routine when I was a student.
I didn\'t know why I study.
>> I didn\'t know why I needed to study.
Before studing, student gets to recognize reason why you have to study.
>> Before studying, students must be aware of the reason why they have to study.
It is that I want to change.
>> That is what I want to change.

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