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My father told me that you never believe men.
currently, I surroud a lot of men at my working environment.
always I am bewaring about men.
Especially when I drink with my coworkers, I do that.
Until now, women are still dangerous by men.
So I have to protect myself.
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Hi [이름]!
Good job in getting your point across.
I understood your thoughts completely.
That\'s the importance of writing.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My father told me that you never believe men.
>> My father told me that I should never trust men.
currently, I surroud a lot of men at my working environment.
currently, I surroud a lot of men at my working environment.
>> Currently, I\'m surrounded by a lot of men at work.
always I am bewaring about men.
always I am bewaring about men.
>> I\'m always careful around them.
Especially when I drink with my coworkers, I do that.
Especially when I drink with my coworkers, I do that.
>> I do that especially when I grab a drink with my co-workers.
Until now, women are still dangerous by men.
Until now, women are still dangerous by men.
>> Until now, women are still in danger in the company of men.
So I have to protect myself.
So I have to protect myself.
>> That\'s why I have to protect myself.
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