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학생이 쓴 원문
If I can change something in my life.
I want to change my idle time during colleage.
I had to learn and try more, but i didn\'t.
So I regret that I having been idle during colleage
If I can be colleage student one more time, I\'ll live more diligently...
I\'ll establish a goal, make plan, and execute it.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]! ^^
We have the same opinion.
I also think that I was not a good student in college, but that\'s okay~
I think the most important thing is knowing our mistakes and trying to be better. ^^
Thank you so much for this~
Thank you so much for this~
See you in class!
- T. Rina
1. If I can change something in my life, I want to change my idle time during colleage.
>> If I can change something in my life, I want to change my idle time during college.
2. I had to learn and try more, but i didn\'t.
>> I had to learn and try more, but I didn\'t.
3. So I regret that I having been idle during colleage
>> So, I regret that I was an idle student during college.
4. If I can be colleage student one more time, I\'ll live more diligently...
>> If I can be college student one more time, I\'ll live more diligently.
5. I\'ll establish a goal, make plan, and execute it.
>> If I can change something in my life, I want to change my idle time during college.
2. I had to learn and try more, but i didn\'t.
>> I had to learn and try more, but I didn\'t.
3. So I regret that I having been idle during colleage
>> So, I regret that I was an idle student during college.
4. If I can be colleage student one more time, I\'ll live more diligently...
>> If I can be college student one more time, I\'ll live more diligently.
5. I\'ll establish a goal, make plan, and execute it.
>> CORRECT!
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