homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you think there’s a difference between living and existing?
There are some differences between living and existing. I think the biggest difference between living and existing is how it moves or how it works. I would say a thing lives if it works meaningful and even if it doesn\'t have the biological characteristics. For example, if my machine works well then I would say it lives well. However, if my machine doesn\'t work the right way and it starts showing nothing on its screen then I would say this machine is dead. Also, if a thing doesn\'t move or it can move by the other power source only then I would say it exists. For example, if a rock moves down by the flow then we wouldn\'t say that it lives and we would say it exists.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Very interesting idea there!
You got it right!
However we can also say that all things that are present exists.
If something makes use of life in a meaningful way then it is living.
Have a good day!
There are some differences between living and existing.
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I think the biggest difference between living and existing is how it moves or how it works.
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I would say a thing lives if it works meaningful and even if it doesn\'t have the biological characteristics.
>>I would say a thing lives if it works meaningfully and even if it doesn\'t have the biological characteristics.
For example, if my machine works well then I would say it lives well.
>>CORRECT
However, if my machine doesn\'t work the right way and it starts showing nothing on its screen then I would say this machine is dead.
>>CORRECT
Also, if a thing doesn\'t move or it can move by the other power source only then I would say it exists.
>>CORRECT
For example, if a rock moves down by the flow then we wouldn\'t say that it lives and we would say it exists.
>>CORRECT
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