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I think we need to make them practice a lot. When we give them easy life now, then we will be hard after grown up. They need to have lots of challenges right now.
강사 첨삭
Wow! What a nice idea!
I think we need to make them practice a lot.
>> Correct.
When we give them easy life now, then we will be hard after grown up.
>> When we give them an easy life now, it might cause for them to have a hard time when they after grow up.
They need to have lots of challenges right now.
>> Correct.
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