homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What’s your favorite story (can be in books, movies, etc.)? Why?
I have several stories that I like. When I was young I liked to read history books and I also liked to read novels. However, as I grow and grow, I became to prefer to watch. I am not picky when I watch a movie. I like every genre such as action movies, horror movies, comedy movies, romance movies, so on. Nevertheless, If I have to choose just 1 movie then I would choose \"Click\". Its story is about a man who has a superpower remote controller. He can control time with the machine so he started skipping the moment that he doesn\'t want to experience. However, he skipped too much time and when he recognized that, it was too late. He could make a big accomplishment in his job but he lost his family, health, and happiness. Through this movie, I realized how my family is important to my life. If you didn\'t watch this movie yet, I recommend this movie.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I actually watched this before!
It is very funny!
My father really enjoyed watching this movie so we watched it multiple times.
Have a good night!
I have several stories that I like.
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When I was young I liked to read history books and I also liked to read novels.
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However, as I grow and grow, I became to prefer to watch.
>>However, as I grow older, I prefer watching.
I am not picky when I watch a movie.
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I like every genre such as action movies, horror movies, comedy movies, romance movies, so on.
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Nevertheless, If I have to choose just 1 movie then I would choose \"Click\".
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Its story is about a man who has a superpower remote controller.
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He can control time with the machine so he started skipping the moment that he doesn\'t want to experience.
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However, he skipped too much time and when he recognized that, it was too late.
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He could make a big accomplishment in his job but he lost his family, health, and happiness.
>>CORRECT
Through this movie, I realized how my family is important to my life.
>>CORRECT
If you didn\'t watch this movie yet, I recommend this movie.
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