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2020-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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1. The environmentalist argued that ____x___clean air should be __the____universal \"human right\". He discussed the effects of ___a____pollution on ___the___human health. 2. Cheryl thinks ____the__cats make the best pets, but I think ___the___dogs have more personality. 3. The documentary discussed whether ___the___cat was domesticated in ancient Egypt or in an earlier period. I have ____a_____cat, so I was very interested in the program. 4. I wish I could play __the______violin. I love string instruments like ___the___violins and cellos.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for trying hard every day.
We still have a lot of things to discuss.
Hope you\'re ready today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
1. The environmentalist argued that clean air should be the universal \"human right\". He discussed the effects of a pollution on the human health.
>> The environmentalist argued that clean air should be a universal \"human right\". He discussed the effects of pollution on human health.
2. Cheryl thinks the cats make the best pets, but I think the dogs have more personality.
>> Cheryl thinks cats make the best pets, but I think dogs have more personality.
3. The documentary discussed whether the cat was domesticated in ancient Egypt or in an earlier period. I have a cat, so I was very interested in the program.
>> The documentary discussed whether the cat was domesticated in ancient Egypt or in an earlier period. I have a cat, so I was very interested in the program.
4. I wish I could play the violin. I love string instruments like the violins and cellos.
>> I wish I could play the violin. I love string instruments like violins and cellos.

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