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When I was a high school student that I didn’t decide my career in cramming education in Korea, I took a career counseling with counselling teacher in school. The time when the teacher listened to my story carefully and thought about my career path together was memorable, so I decided to be a person like a teacher who helps students like me ,and then I decided to study counselling. When I made a decision to study youth counselling, I was excited to have what I want to study. On the other hand, there was confusion whether this decision was right or not. Then I finally realized that my choice was right through understanding myself by studying a major course and taking psychological tests in Hoseo University. However, on the one hand, I had a question why I could have confidence with my career path now because I certainly knew about jobs that are good for me through aptitude tests provided to middle and high school students in Korean public education system.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
When I was a high school student that I didn’t decide my career in cramming education in Korea, I took a career counseling with counselling teacher in school.
>> When I was a high school student and I hadn\'t decided on my career in dependent education in Korea, I had career counseling with our guidance counselor in school.
The time when the teacher listened to my story carefully and thought about my career path together
>> That time, the teacher listened to my story carefully and we thought about my career path together.
was memorable, so I decided to be a person like a teacher who helps students like me ,and then I decided to study counselling.
>> It was very memorable, so I decided to be a person like her who helps students like me
and then I decided to study counselling.
>> That\'s when I decided to study counseling.
When I made a decision to study youth counselling, I was excited to have what I want to study.
>> After that decision, I was excited that I was finally able to choose what I wanted to study.
On the other hand, there was confusion whether this decision was right or not.
>> However, there was a still a part of me that was confused whether I have made the right decision or not.
Then I finally realized that my choice was right through understanding myself by studying a major course and taking psychological tests in Hoseo University.
>> Then I finally realized that my choice was right by understanding myself, studying a major course and taking psychological tests in Hoseo University.
However, on the one hand, I had a question why I could have confidence with my career path now because I certainly knew about jobs that are good for me through aptitude tests provided to middle and high school students in Korean public education system.
>> That\'s when I started to wonder why I didn\'t have confidence in my career path before because even then, the aptitude tests provided to middle and high school students in accordance to the Korean public education system showed what jobs were good for me.
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