Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw a korean book last time. It was about some military people. They were 3 people. They were too hungry so they went to the village. But people hided all the foods bcs they don’t have a lot of things to eat too. So 3 military people decided to make a rock soop. They put lots of things that village people hided and they made it and ate it together.
강사 첨삭
What is this book\'s title?
I saw a korean book last time.
>> I read a Korean book last time. .
It was about some military people.
>> Correct.
They were 3 people.
>> Correct.
They were too hungry so they went to the village.
>> They were too hungry so they went to a village.
But people hided all the foods bcs they don’t have a lot of things to eat too.
>> But people hid all the foods because they don’t have a lot of things to eat too.
So 3 military people decided to make a rock soop.
>> So they decided to make a rock soup.
They put lots of things that village people hided and they made it and ate it together.
>> They put lots of things that the village people hid. They then made soup and ate it together.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.