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On your birthday, would you rather go somewhere or get something
Actually, I don\'t have anythings. And I want to go somewhere.
Example, I would like to go camping or pension in forest.
My birthday is similar to my baby birth date.
I will plan to go somewhere, but It\'s not concrete plan yet.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]. Happy Friday! ^_^
T. Irene
On your birthday, would you rather go somewhere or get something
Actually, I don\'t have anythings.
Actually, I don\'t have anythings.
>>> Actually, I don\'t want to get anything.
And I want to go somewhere.
>>> I just want to go somewhere.
Example, I would like to go camping or pension in forest.
>>> I just want to go somewhere.
Example, I would like to go camping or pension in forest.
>>> For example. I would like to go camping or in a pension house in the forest.
My birthday is similar to my baby birth date.
My birthday is similar to my baby birth date.
>>> My birthdate is the same as my baby\'s.
I will plan to go somewhere, but It\'s not concrete plan yet.
I will plan to go somewhere, but It\'s not concrete plan yet.
>>> I will plan to go somewhere but I haven\'t made any concrete plans yet.
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