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There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength.

I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.

You can learn from this process.
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T. Jeny

What are some reason why privacy is important for you?

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Privacy is the most important things to live life. 

>>Privacy is the most important thing to live life.

One of the big reason is that we are living in the world which has too many problems or risks.

>>One of the biggest reasons is that we are living in a world that has too many problems or risks.

 There are protests, murders, terrors, and information leakages. 

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And among this dangers, the information leakage is the most easiest way to be damaged from strangers. 

>>And among these dangers, the information leakage is the easiest way to be damaged by strangers. 

This world is technology based, so we have to get prepared always from risks.

>>This world is technology-based, so we have to get prepared always for risks.

 That is why our privacy is important.

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 If something wrong, our information could be abused in bad ways, and seriously also could be connected to big problem. 

>> If something is wrong, our information could be abused in bad ways, and it seriously could be connected to a big problem. 

So what I want to say in this is we have to be careful about our privacy.

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